The brevity of your responses,
leaves me perplexed.
Your rationale leaves me,
dumbstruck.
Maybe I am too emotional but,
your self control amazes me.
I know you care, you do a lot,
But keeping it all in,
is not fair to my heart.
I need expression, demonstration,
Shouting from the rooftops,
Jumping on the couch,
Kinds of proclamation.
A quiet whisper in my ear will do too,
As long as you say "I love you".
Never mind I ask for it,
Say it nevertheless.
It means the world to me,
A matter of life and death.
Lucks aka Sulekha
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What a coincidence!!?!? Just read a quote that meant "A heart without words is better than words without a heart"... and you write about expressions... ;) Love it...
I love this! Sulekha! So powerful, honest and to the point. Love should never hide, but the carrier of love is often too afraid to be revealed. I know this well and have been this person too.
I'm working on shouting more from the rooftops. It may take some practice though. ;-)
Tamstarz
Thanks Tameka, We all need to hear it even when we know, we are loved. Glad you stopped by, thanks.
Boy you never cease to amaze me.. you capture what we all have felt in our life.
Loved it
Jim
Thank you so much for your encouraging compliments, appreciate them a lot, Jim.
I need that a lot too - just don't know how to put it so beautifully as you just did : )
Thank you, Mitr...
A poem
A playful toy
So full of joy
It’s not a ploy
Words play of troy
A thousand ships
Words Past your lips
And sore
Great parse and more
Thank you; I cannot say more
god bless it beautful
I agree...I feel the same sometimes!! Beautiflly written....
@Roy, You are quite a poet, thanks.
@SS, thank you dear friend, love your comments.
wow !!!!!!!!!!!!!
@Priya, You like? Thanks
@Chokher,Thank you friend for your compliment.
Can I copy and post this up near my computer to remind me to tell my dearest what I feel for her every time I see her?
Better still, I'll just paste it up in my mind where I can see it all the time. Thanks.
Thanks Jim and sorry for the late response, please do. My pleasure.
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