Wail from the coffin
Memories fade the edges of pictures imprinted on our minds.
They blur the images and make them fuzzy and smudged,
Unclear, unfocussed, grainy, our thoughts become.
Recalling past events invokes an unidentifiable ache,
where once the heart used to beat.
Recollecting old memories, damages the soul.
A place where once you were happy, no longer exists.
It’s vanished, wiped clean of its existence.
Destroyed and damaged beyond recognition.
There is no turning back, its all gone.
Disappeared, washed away by the tides of,
unfeeling time and deliberate neglect.
All traces of fond times and happy places,
erased from the unsuspecting past.
It was a gradual decomposition, chip by chip,
each monument was broken down, inch by inch,
torturously, crushed slowly, blow by blow.
The degradation was swift but excruciatingly slow.
The slate was wiped clean, of its emotions,
and feelings, stripped of its treasures.
The path to the past’s door was barricaded with,
Padlocks of the present, gates slammed shut,
like the closing of the coffin lid.
Pitch black, suffocating, claustrophobic,
My living space has become.
Gasping for breath, clawing at the velvet-lined lid,
I scream wordlessly, panic sets in.
All I can hear is the sound of my voice,
Shrieking and calling your name.
You walked away after hammering the last nail,
in the coffin, unconcerned of my heart’s decay.
Oblivious to,
my soul’s rotting,
my life seeping out,
of my abandoned and listless body.
My outstretched hand, imploring eyes.
My heartrending wails, my strangled cries.
My unfulfilled desires, my unspoken sighs.
My final words to you,
had you stopped to listen, were,
“Darling, I’ll always love you.”
Lucks aka Sulekha
54 comments:
heavy and tragic. i hope you feel better soon!
@Linda, Thanks for the visit and comment. Poetry is tragedy mixed with intensity :)
Oh, so moving . . . your imagery literally jumps at the reader, captures them, pulls them in.
Just extraordinary!
Blessings!
@Martha, Thank you so much for your lovely comment.Words have the power to wound and heal...
What a deep poem on all levels..@A place where once you were happy, no longer exists.
It’s vanished, wiped clean of its existence.@
Sorrowful and eloquently written...you bring your emotions to life in your poems...
Moving and intense, I could feel every emotion. <3
beautiful Sulekha. loved it.
touching poem :-) Loved it..
Someone is Special
Touching moving words and so true as time erodes even the best memory. Love and pain go hand in hand unfortunately. Tragic but I liked this poem alot :)
Its v deep, beautifuly crafted emotions...god bless u!!
Love
Mani
You are a broken angel Sulekkha. Here, in these words, you’ve painted a perfect picture of pathos.
Next, I hope you'll write a fond memory of your beloved dad’s kindness. Show us what he’s like…
Hello.
The beauty of poetry is that it has the ability to evoke intense emotions of the heart.
This is tragic & heartfelt.
You have the magic of a poet's pen.
Thank you for sharing & visiting. I appreciate your comments.
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn
Sad, touching...but beautifully said. Hats off!
That was an intense and moving poetic work!
I could just feel that coffin lid being shut and me gasping for air. When love is gone this is exactly how you feel and you expressed it beautifully, the loneliness, the devastated heart, the suffocating feeling. Dark and graphically very well expressed poem. Loved it Outlier.
there are moments when it feels like that but does death or dying have to be this dark?
What made you write this Sulekha,this is so intense,and I can feel the intensity of the words,very well written...
Ohh..! I Can't imagine such thing in my life that from coffin anyone can shared a deep sorrow of a dead heart...Such a nice post......
past can never be buried and the sweetest things of the past become the most bitter memories.
-Portia
Oh my God!! That is devastating Lucks...my heart is still pounding from reading it!! Wow!
Beautifully written. Loved this post :) God bless :)
I am bawling now - you are superb darling!!! I had to read it a number of times and am sure I will read it many times more - wow!
@Nelieta, Thank you for appreciating my poem, It's a bit too sad :)
@Jessica, We all write and express our emotions, some happy some sad. Thank you for your beautiful compliment.
@Jan, thank you so much for the comment.
@Sukanya, Welcome to my blog and thanks for the compliment.
@Someone is special, Thank you very much for liking my poem.
@David, Pain is a great teacher and a wonderful muse. Thanks for your lovely compliment.
@Mani, I like reading your poetry, thanks for the visit and comment.
@Debra, I love the term 'Broken Angel', thank you for the honor :) will write a fond memory of my beloved dad’s kindness and share with you all.Thank you for your help.
@Andy David, Magic of a poet's pen...I love this compliment. Thank you for the visit and the wonderful comment.
@Janaki, Thanks a ton friend.
@Rahul Bhatia, Welcome to my blog and thank you for the compliment.
@Rimly, I cherish the comments and compliments of my friends and fellow writers. You are a gifted poetess and such high praise coming from you makes me happy :) Thanks Outlier, love your words and you.
@Savira, Death is full of light. This is the death of the heart and not the body. Thank you for your comment.
@Alpana, Thank you for your wonderful compliment. Some days you want to challenge your thinking and create a different piece of work. It was one such moment, when this poem was born.
@Harshal, welcome to my blog and thank you for your compliment.
@Portia, Very true, sweetest things of the past become the most bitter memories..thanks for the visit and your lovely comment.
@Swati, wow, I love your compliment :) Thank you for reading and commenting.
@Shreya, Welcome to my blog and thank you for your comment.
@Mitr, Thank you for the most wonderful compliment. Appreciate your words...a lot.
My dear Dearest Sulekha, I have a gift for you.
Please feel free to claim it here.
@Andy,Thanks a ton for the honor...appreciate your gesture, god bless.
I felt every word you wrote in your poem Sulekha. It was more of a wake up call for me, am I or have I allowed myself to die like that after a broken heart?
I do recall how I've been so affected ~ devastated by the loss.
But love is life giving and if I love forever, then it has to be a promise to continue living not dying.
It's pretty heavy and intense but I am grateful that I have mirrored myself into it ;)
Oh so beautiful and true and heart wrenching. The truth to all of it, at the total loss of what once was precious; and the bitterness to this truth, brought tears to my eyes
Awesome poem :)
@Melissa, Thank you for reflecting on my poem. Love never dies and those who love live on forever, with or without their loved ones. Pain is the antiseptic lotion on the hurt. It heals with time.
@Jerly, Welcome to my blog and thank you for the follow. Appreciate your beautiful compliment.
@Jerly, thank you :)
WOW you certainly painted a picture full of emotions with your words with this one. My life philosophy has seen me move on from the break down of my relationship, don't look back look forward
@Larry, Looking back only slows you down and brings negativity in life. But sometimes the past revives you, keeps you sane. thanks for your comment.
This is a brilliant poem. With the last line, it knocked me down. Looking forward to read more of your poetry!:)
@Sameera, welcome to my blog and thank you for your lovely compliment.
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