Tuesday, July 5, 2011

When we lose a loved one…

                                  
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When we lose a loved one,
we lose with him,
a few heart-beats.
A few precious moments,
of pure love and joy.
A lot of shared smiles,
and countless sweet sighs.

We lose numerous ‘no-reasons’ hugs,
we shared when we were happy,
and when we were sad.
Or when we were plain glad,
to see each-other after long.

We lose a piece of our mind,
a few broken breaths.
A lot of wasted moments,
when we could have been together,
instead of being miles away,
from one-another.

When we lose a loved one,
We realise the importance of time.
The shortness of our breaths,
the untimely ache in our hearts,
the throbbing of our pulse,
and the pinch in our souls.
We understand that,
to live fully in the moment,
is, to never regret a lost second.

When we lose a loved one,
we fear every dark night,
every late-night call.
We shudder at the sound of,
 the ringing of the door-bell,
and cringe at the sight of,
a doctor walking towards us,
with a pitying look in his eyes.
Some papers in his hands ,
for us to sign.

When we lose a loved one,
We become forever, sad.
With grief,
we go quietly mad.







Lucks aka Sulekha


35 comments:

Debra said...

When someone you love becomes a memory, that memory becomes a treasure. Thank you for sharing your beautiful and sacred treasure.
Bless you dear Sulekha

sulekkha said...

Debra, I love reading your comments on my blog, they are so personal and touching. Thank you for visiting and leaving your lovely compliment.Love the blessings too...

Swati said...

Lucks you got everything bang on...that's exactly how I feel. Of everything, I dread losing of a loved one most....lovely poem!

sulekkha said...

Swati, you are totally biased my friend,thank you for your wonderfully encouraging and wonderful compliments. Waiting for your blog to start, your poem on my blog is lovely.

fantasy in practicality said...

the one thing we can never compensate with life is losing someone near and dear. we can never live new moments, only treasure the old. no console can fill in the grief, the pain. the exact feelings you depicted in your poem when a loved one rests forever in peace, its a sad but very true practical poem, tears in eyes.

Irfanuddin said...

very thoughtful....yes,there is nothing more painful and sad then losing our Loved ones...

Kriti said...

Those precious moments are always yours to keep. They can never go away with the person - those memories are yours forever darling. Lovely poem!

Shloka said...

I loved the last two stanzas! Very well done, Mthrz! ^_^

Rimly said...

I have lost a few and I can understand what it is like to lose someone. But time is a great healer. You will always have them in your memories, in that sense you never lose them ,they are with you always. beautiful Outlier.

Vaisakhi said...

memories r for forever.....lovely thought...loved the concludin stanzas...:)

JANU said...

Beautifully written...

Alpana Jaiswal said...

You made me cry with this one Sulekha..its beautiful,and so heartfelt...I don't know what else I should write..I do hope you understand.

Larry Lewis said...

We will always have our memories. Sometimes they will make us sad, other times they will make us smile, or create a warmth inside. It's never easy to lose someone that you love, but we have to go on.

David said...

You did an amazing job conveying your feelings!! The words could easily have come from me as that's how I feel upon the death of a beloved one, so many beautiful things are lost forever and will never happen again but the treasured memories will last forever. No long can steal the cherished thoughts and feelings that carry on in our heart. Love never dies as long as we keep it alive in our heart and I'm sure you will do that. Thanks for the touching post and remain strong!!

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Unknown said...

Losing a loved one is never easy but we must go on... keeping them alive through the memories we carry with us daily

Jessica M said...

There is nothing more difficult than losing one that you treasure. What a touching poem. Blessings to you.

Unknown said...

When you write of your pain at losing someone you love in such a wondrous manner you bring their essence alive to all of us. We really do not need to know anything about them. We just know that they were someone who generated so much love in their lives that they will never truly be gone.What a wonderful person this was to produce so much hurt and longing in another person at the death. May you always keep them in your heart and thoughts.

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Sandy said...

Very explicitly put and with all the pain and reality of losing a loved one. A big warm hug!

Melissa Tandoc said...

Oh Sulekha every post you write leads me to some creativity. I really admire how words could easily flow from you poet friends...

But when there are so intense emotions, I'd sing them. A song brings out everything inside.

When you lose a loved one opens every line... and it leaves a mark in my heart and in my mind...

I truly loved it Sulekha.

BlogNostics said...

Sorrow isn't forever Sulekha. Life will never be the same without our loved ones and it's just saying it's time to let go. Great poem. Wonderfully written.

Bongo said...

Your words are beautiful....they brought tears...losing someone is never easy..memories beautiful..but always a longing for more time ..As always...XOXOXO

Ethereous Muser said...

Loved the read. It was as if you had gotten inside most of our minds and churned these emotions inside out. Great poem!

sulekkha said...

@Fantacy in Practicality, Nothing can fill the void. Thanks for the caring comment.

@Irfanuddin, thanks for the thoughtful compliment.

@Mitr,Thank god for memories. And thank you for your support.

@Shloka, thanks dottrz, love you lots.

sulekkha said...

@Rimly, can one live on memories alone? We try to survive, don't we?Thanks my dear Outlier.

sulekkha said...

@Vaisakhi, thanks a ton, loved them too.

@Janu, thank you so much.

@Alpana, thanks friend and I do understand what you mean.

@Larry,Thank you for the visit and the comment, we do have to go on.

sulekkha said...

@David, I know you understand, you have lost Erin. We keep their memories alive in our dead hearts, life is cruel. Thanks for the sensitive compliment and wishes.

sulekkha said...

@Debbie, thank you so much for understanding my grief.

@Jessica, Losing a loved one is like dying a bit yourself, thanks for the read and comment.

@Jim, when I lost my father I thought that I'd die with him but he helped me stay alive from up there, gave me strength and support. I still miss him a lot. Thanks for the beautiful compliment.

sulekkha said...

@Sandy, welcome to my blog and thank you for your lovely compliment.

@Melissa, you are an angel and I am waiting for you to make a song out of my poem. Love your sensitive and genuine compliments.

@Blognostics, thank you for the visit and comment. Letting go is so painful.

@Bongo, time is what we fall short of, thanks for visiting and commenting.

@Ethereous muser, welcome to my blog and thank you for commenting. I guess we all feel alike and share the same emotions of sorrows and joy.

Unknown said...

your poem touched my heart.What more can I say?
-Portia

sulekkha said...

@Portia, welcome to my blog and thank you for reading and leaving such a beautiful comment.

Rachit said...

when we loose someone, we loose a part of us.. so true and pure.. the pain of separation is incurable.

Nice read
Weakest LINK :)

sulekkha said...

@Rachit, welcome and thank you for your kind comment.

Healing Morning said...

This was so beautifully written and expressed, Sulekkha. One of my dear friends lost her beloved Mom today, and my heart breaks for her and the empty physical space that she now has in her life. We all know the memories are there and will be cherished, but the physical presence is that which tears at the heart...as our arms ache for one more embrace. You captured the pathos of this type of loss so profoundly. <3

sulekkha said...

Dawn, you always know the right things to say and you do understand what I am talking about. thank you for visiting and leaving this lovely comment for me.