The perfume of the moist poetry,
haunts the soft breeze.
The Universe asks the question,
But I laugh and baby girl squirms.
Women blush and think,brother
Sorry Secret decay of ice fever.
Web dance of translucent smoke,
is no more Wet, ok Brilliant too.
Sulekha aka Lucks
19 comments:
So lovely! I love how poetry flows and moves from my desk of spread out tiles to the net and around the world and back again! Magical Sulekha!
Tameka, thanks a lot for the idea and your lovely words.
Very well written....A pleasure to be here as usual.
lovely here my try
Translucent universe brilliants laugh
Breezing smoke women’s perfume haunts seer blush
Wet dance iced fever not question more
Poetry’s soft baby girl squirm fever on ice
Decay moist brother wet dance too
But haunting blush decay no I ask softy
Web of question at more think more not
Translucent universe brilliants laugh
Women’s perfume haunts seer blush
From Sulekha prompted by Tameka damn you knew this was going to be great and it was even better then I though it would be!! Excellent ladies!!!
http://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/09/photographing-sunsets-at-key-west.html
hey Jim i am no lady
HA! Lol@ at Roy. You certainly are no lady dear. I'm sure Jim didn't mean that! ;-)
Here is my contribution:
I smoke poetry and squirm. Translucent universe. Brilliant fever. Question me not. It's my secret dance.
We might have to work this into a weekly feature. What do you guys think? It sure was fun! :-)
Beautiful thought Lucks. Wonderful!
Oooof too good!! What will we do with you Sulekha Rawat??
'Translucent universe brilliants laugh' love that beautiful...AS ALWAYS....XOXOXOXO
I loved the sensuousness of 'moist poetry'... you girls (and Roy!) have something wonderful going on here! :)
What a great idea! I love it!
You got me on sensuousness!.. You gals rock!
Such a pretty mind image!
Oh if only i had some of your skills in words
Thank you friends,
@Alpana
@Roy
@Jim
@Sonia
@Swati
@Corrine
@Larry
@Shortpoems
@sili
@savira
@Bongo
Tameka
I really appreciate your comments and love you guys for visiting and liking my attempt in this creative challange.
wah wah wah wah - and many more innumerable wahs. You are fascinating Mitr - Loved it.
Thanks a ton dearest Mitr of mine <3
It comes so easy to you ... a flash of words and ooo poetry ;)...
I loved the mixture of words... random thoughts... perfume...
Your poetry like perfume has a lingering scent ... could smell it...
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